I Hunger
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I want to be loved
Anew
Like a Gypsy dancing for coins
I strive to lure
Someone
Fresh
Attention whore that I am
Always surveying the crowd
For the next
Ripe
Thing
Come hither sweet boy
I hunger at so many orifices
To be
Fed
Read me, write me, this will
Delight me
But do not please me quickly
Where’s the fun
Tempt me, ignore me
Come again
Once you have me
Know this
Your time
Is almost done
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Oh LM, did I scare you? Sorry. Several, but the next in line is tears and crap I don't like to own up to.
Well, well. How coy. So playful. I love it.
Thanks Frieda. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
A masterpiece again Randy!
Read me, write me, this will
Delight me.............
What is this? You made me want and crave for this woman, wanton woman! This poem is beyond nice Randy.
You are really good at this poetry thing! I like this one a lot........great rhythm and flow to it.
yes indeed great flow to it
I read it again! Couldn't help it!
Thumps up!
Shamel, I'm glad you liked this one. I'm not as bad as this woman, and yet there is truth in it. Some women like hunks, I like writers.
And thanks for coming by again! *giggle*
alekhouse, Thank you so much. I've been trying to grow in the rhythm department.
Brenda thanks for commenting. I'm always curious what other poets think.
Love the rhythm of this poem, one of your best I think, the illustration is perfect, well done.
Just a bite then you toss them back, huh? Nicely told and a vivid picture painted with your words!
Oh wow, thanks Gypsy.
Yep Chris, I'm a terribly fickle harlot.
Love it! A little role reversal -- the hunter becomes the hunted, the thrill is in the chase, and all that usual male as pursuer stuff turned right back at them. Poor things:-). You go, girl. I hope all your orifices get fed today!! MM
loved it RB , very playfully put
Thanks for your great comment MM! I only wish I had that much moxie in the flesh.
Hawkesdream - I'm glad you enjoyed it.
CB - Ya, aren't I just a bad ass :)
Exquisite.
Thanks for reading ledefensetech.
I love this...you have been readig my mind again...IT'S NOT FAIR! It's all about the hunt, the prize and the satisfation of another fresh night of LUST.
Woe to thee that should delight me.
Great poem Randy! Alas that part of my life is done, I do miss the hunt however, but I do not miss the drama, the calls and the broken hearts. A man is not without emotion, love and lust can be fleeting things. I do love my wife, and there it is an ember, never to cool and always ready to burst into flame. Thanks for this Randy.
Mmmmm, I got to you Trooper. That delights me also.
That part of my life is just beginning again. Wish me happy hunting :)
You did indeed. Don't hurt the wild life...well, maybe a little :)
If a speckled fawn with those big deer eyes and long lashes, gets all deer in the headlights at me and hits my grill, is it really my fault? (metaphorically speaking)
ROFL! Good point, but beware, sometimes the deer may appear to be a simple herbivore, but is truly a carnivore in simple clothing.
Consider me warned ;)
Ah Randy.. It's like we're twins! Tee hee - you got the good hair, tho!! Love this one! If you find "him" ask if he has a friend.. for me.. :)
Will do Candie. I gotta stop reading Janetta's poems too. Makes me all the hungrier! LOL.
Randy, omg! I wish I can write with fierce passion as well as you can. Another wonderful, and hawt read, Randy!
Whew...I think I need a cold shower...nicely done! :D
AIDY, I've learned you have to write in the heat of it. When its gone its gone. When I get all settled down in a nice relationship again I'll probably write about grilled cheese sandwiches or something :)
Back at ya Janetta! We are two peas in a pod.
Wow, this is pretty good, when i first started i said to myself "this isn't what im looking for" but just when i was about to hit th back button i read another line and it sucked me back in, Great job, i love it!
Glad you stuck around dbg. Curious which line "sucked" you back in.
The only hunt left for me is to find the real me. I intend to hunt within myself for that answer...BUT...I do remember the passion that is so vivid in your words. Oh so sweet...so delectable...but not worth the calories. It's been hard dragging around the extra two hundred pounds for the last 28 years but now that he's gone I intend to stay the slimmer trimmer me. Still I am a big fan...You certainly have a way with the pen.
What a wonderful comment. Yes the only prize worth really hunting is probably ones self. Try telling that to my hormones though. Good luck with your search and I hope you find peace and bliss in there waiting for you.
Let's Eat
Your speaking my language. Chop sticks?
Deadlier with your pen than you are in those profile pic jeans.
I purge myself. I cannot read poem after poem of these lust filled emotions.... you Miss have captured rapture by the tail.
If this is true, I expect a lot more comments from you, attention whore that I am.
Still wading the waters of hubpages... slowly commenting where I see fit.. keep writing I am sure I'll have more to say
I'm glad you like it Kimberly.
Wow ~ and " JUST DAMN " you rock gurl ! I love it !
And i loved all the comments you recieved ~
So, do you have to get restraining orders against all of the "Next, ripe things" whose time is done? I could see this character followed by bus loads of pining men, wanting to be used and domped yet again...E
Sabrina I love your comment. Made me grin.
Seldon, I'm not sure how to answer this one. I think I'll just smile coyly.
I've read you, and you delight me.
Now what?
Write! write young poet.
One of my favorite qualities of your writing is the brutal honesty. Most artists probably possess this desire to lure in new fans and admirers, to engulf everyone in the whole world, yet few would speak so candidly on the subject.
Juicy stuff. The last lines reminded me of a Metallica song lyric from way back when I could stand to listen to them; something to the effect of: "just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disappear."
Oh I like those lyrics Doug. I've been told quite often then I write honestly. I just don't know another way to do it.
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Laughing Mom 2 years ago
Hmmm.... a little different flavor than the last couple. Excellent, as usual. You say you have more on your desk???????