What I Want
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What do I want?
To be your everything
To rock your world
To make you the center of my universe
To make you love me
What do I fear?
You’ll need me
You’ll revolve your life around me
You’ll make me your happiness
You’ll love me
What do I want?
To get what I fear
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We need courage of course, sacrifice, unconditional love... Thanks RB, nice one.
The first two stanzas could be the words of people in a obsessive type relationship... then you curve ball me and make it into something totally different. I loved it.
WOW I loved it.
You gotta love this...We have to be careful what we wish for, don't we, Randy? Great poem!
Hi Candie, where have you been hiding? I think I've found it.
Shamel thanks for reading I'm glad you liked it. I don't completely agree with you though. You make love sound like work. Courage to lead with an open heart I suppose, but I don't plan on sacrificing this time around at all. Love unconditionally? I found children are the only ones I can love unconditionally. Grownups can always screw up a good loving relationship. :)
Hi Enigmatic! Just a poem about the waring factions of my being. So glad you enjoyed it.
So glad ftgmom!
If you believe in manifesting like I do Dohn, you have to be especially careful. lol. You could be innocently lusting after something and have it show up on your doorstep.
RB, you made it sound gloomy! Ok, how about: love is to love responsibly, passionately, and without expecting anything in return? As for me, I just love spontaneously.
Oh yes that sounds heaps better!
Ok then :)
I liked the poem...reminds me of someone. Good one! : )
Like yourself Gwennie? Or someone else?
" What do I want?
To get what I fear "
Reminds me of that old adage be careful what you wish for, I yet again love your poem Randy, that one was short but full of insight, hugs from your friend CG !
Some times it doesn't take many words to express my feelings. Thanks for stopping by CG.
you expressed your feelings well, as usual
Thanks Brenda :)
Bye BC. Be well and be happy :)
It is always the most trivial of desires that confuses and consumes forever longing. Well done, dear Randy.
Hi AIDY! Part of me is always fearful but as my friend says, "the heart wants, what the heart wants."
May you live as long as you want, and may you never want as long as you live. Isn't it funny how we are always drawn most to what we fear?~~MFB III
Funny peculiar or funny ha ha? Both if we can laugh at ourselves I suppose, which I can. Thanks for stopping by MFB.
Candie V Level 4 Commenter 2 years ago
Me too, Randy! Line forms behind me!! When you find someone strong enuf, in themselves, then you'll have it all!!